Some Thoughts about Merit

An unknown masterpiece of post-war Existentialist literature.

I’ve been reading a lot lately, and much of it seems to cohere in what Jung (or Sting) would have called synchronicity. I’ve been working for a year on a novel called A Woman of a Thousand Names, about a writer in the 1940s and beyond who becomes a driver of the paperback revolution, writing dozens of novels under endless pseudonyms and publishing thousands more.

A couple of weeks ago, Nora and I were in Otter Creek Used Books in Middlebury, and I came across the book pictured above: Out from Eden, by Victoria Lincoln. It was a perfect model of what I’ve been writing about: published by Pocket in 1948, originally priced at 25ยข, a salacious cover illustrated by a talented artistโ€”in this case, Tom Dunn, who’d drawn for the Marine Corps during the war and went on to a career in commercial illustration. The standardized 4.25″ x 6.25″ format, designed for wire display racks. The nearly 100,000 words compressed by single spacing and 9-point type into a tight package of coarse beige paper with a dyed red edge. The book was so exactly what I was writing about that I paid five bucks for it and took it home.

Friends, it’s really good. It’s an excellent example of post-war existentialism, the loss of certainty that rocked the world from governments to individuals. In this case, it’s a family headed by a struggling artist who veers between full belief in his work and full despair over its meaninglessness. His wife is a lush innocent, his muse and model, who’s fully immersed in each moment and has no concerns over any future. Their son is bookish and mathematical, filled with ideas; their daughter is a savant, uneducated but visually brilliant. The two women actually hold the center of the book, as the churn of men and their noisy plans swirl around them.

Along with the subject matter, it’s Modernist in several other ways. The artist’s agent is coming to terms with his Jewishness, something he’d never fully had to consider before. His two sons have chosen entirely different paths after the war: one moving to California and a life of full American assimilation, the other moving to Israel and a pioneering life of Jewish statehood. And the novelistic methods are of a piece with the content. The point-of-view shifts frequently and with full controlโ€”all of the major characters are given internality in their respective chapters, and their voices are different from one another. Everyone is interpreting what everyone else thinks, a house of mirrors in which truth is unavailable.

It’s just a terrific book, never studied in literature programs, never mentioned in the historical overviews of mid-century lit. It was consumed, read, discarded.


The New York Times ran an article last week about lesbian pulp fiction of the 1950s and 60s. “The novels had to be presented carefully; even in the largest American cities, gay bookstores didn’t yet exist, so the covers, the titles and the stories all had to meet standards that would allow them to be credibly intermingled with run-of-the-mill paperbacks in a mainstream bookshop, or in a stationary store or pharmacy stocked by someone who was either sympathetic, opportunistic or both.” The offhand commonplace of paperbacks was a discretion that allowed them to touch topics that major publishers wouldn’t have dared.

It was also a tool that allowed the pulp houses to claim genres that major publishers and their literary patrons disdained. Romance, of course, the most beloved and most demeaned of all literary forms. Science fiction, westerns, crime and mystery, erotica in the 1960s and 70s… all of those forms had origins in “literature” (Austen, Cooper, Poe, Lawrence, Wells) but had become “popular” and thus not serious. Easy pickings for an industry who knew that the audience existed, even if the awards didn’t.


Speaking of awards, The New Yorker reprinted an article this week originally from 2005, by Louis Menand, called How Much Does Winning a Nobel Prize Matter? Menand writes of the ways that literary awards have always been a commodity, even as they desperately intend to stand above it.

In an information, or โ€œsymbolic,โ€ economy, …the goods themselves are physically worthless: they are mere print on a page or code on a disk. What makes them valuable is the recognition that they are valuable. This recognition is not automatic and intuitive; it has to be constructed. A work of art has to circulate through a sub-economy of exchange operated by a large and growing class of middlemen: publishers, curators, producers, publicists, philanthropists, foundation officers, critics, professors, and so on. The prize system, with its own cadre of career administrators and judges, is one of the ways in which value gets โ€œadded onโ€ to a work. <emphasis mine>

Look in any bookstore and you’ll find endless opportunities for publishers to slap a gold sticker on the front of a book proclaiming it a Booker or Pulitzer or Caldecott or Hugo or Lambda or Nebula or Newbery or Pushcart winner. In the endless, anonymous sea of fiction, these come pre-recommended, bolstering our insufficient judgment. Prizes like these (along with major-media reviews) are the water wings of the literary marketplace, helping some to stay afloat while the others sink.

All fields are susceptible to this. Architecture notably gives its awards to the unlivable and inhospitable, daily life and generosity not being topics of interest to the field’s gatekeepers.

Here’s a list. Sarah Bernstein, Jonathan Escoffery, Paul Harding, Paul Lynch, Chetna Maroo, Paul Murray. If you have ANY IDEA of any of these names, much less all of them and how they fit together, then you also need to recognize how far outside our cultural norms you stand. Simply naming your tastes “superior” doesn’t make them so. What makes some objects valuable is the recognition that they are valuable.


I’ve also started reading a book called The Late Age of Print, by Ted Striphas. (It was published in 2009, so I guess we’re in the Post-Late Age of Print now). It’s an interesting premise, unduly weighted down by its need to generate tenure for its author. His work was to examine what books are as objects as well as ideas. And that inevitably brought him into questions of commodity.

All books are commodities, in many ways similar to other commodities like a bushel of wheat or a dozen eggs. At any given moment, our local bookseller has something like 80,000 books on their shelves; a bewildering array that none of us can comprehend. The first order of business, then, is genre: the subdivision of those 80,000 into somewhat more comprehensible thematic and geographic groups. Fiction hereโ€”nonfiction thereโ€”kids upstairs. Then those first-order categories are subdivided, and subdivided further, until we end up at things like “thrillers” and “horror” and “mystery” and “romance.” The largest and least coherent is literary fiction, an anonymous rainbow of possibilities no different than the wire rack at the corner grocery, the magazine shelf in the airport. Our decisions are made by market forces:

  • Brand loyalty (choosing an author, or sometimes rarely a publisher, we’ve enjoyed before)
  • Recommendation of friends or experts (the publicist for my book said that if you get a review in the Times, you get congratulations from your friends; if you get a review in the Wall Street Journal, you sell books)
  • Packaging and shelf placement. There’s a reason why your bookstore has a “new and notable” table, or a Times Bestsellers shelf. There’s a reason why 98% of books are shelved spine-forward, and 2% are “faced” or shelved with the front cover forward. (Hint: publishers do pay for that.) And the book’s cover and spine do the same work as the box around the Triscuitsโ€”urging us to think “mmm, that looks good.”

Striphas’ own book was a commodity, with a different customer marketโ€”other academics who would decide whether or not to invite him into the club. That’s why he published with Columbia University Press rather than trying to fight his way into Random House.

One of the fun tidbits that Striphas delivers is the fact that the book industry was crushed in the Depression, and worked valiantly to save itself. One of their most successful efforts was to hire the PR pioneer Edward Bernays, who hit the problem sideways and worked with the housing industry (architects, contractors, and decorators) to feature bookshelves as a display of homeowners’ status and taste. “Where there are bookshelves, there will be books,” he said.

Bernays was a strong believer in not merely the power but also the moral importance of propaganda. “Intelligent men must realize that propaganda is the modern instrument by which they can fight for productive ends and help to bring order out of chaos.” That’s the role played by literature and MFA programs in universities, by award juries and the “little magazines;” to convince us unwashed of the intellectual and moral superiority of some books over others.


I used to tell my students that no human being in history has ever wanted a building. They want status, pride, comfort, family harmony, business or organizational successโ€”and they bought or modified a building as a means of accomplishing that.

Likewise, no human being has ever wanted a book. We want more fundamental things, like pleasure or possibility or status or entry to cultural conversation. We buy books in order to accomplish those things.

Likewise, we don’t create books to have books. We create them for pleasure, or possibility, or status, or generosity, or as proof that our lives really have mattered. It’s only by acknowledging that we’re human that we have any hope of transcending commodity. That’s one of the great (and unexpected) blessings of not being part of the publishing industry; I don’t have to respond to market pressures. I can write because the stories intrigue me; because the craft demands my attention; and because I’m pleased to use them as instruments of generosity for my friends.

Instrumentation

Let the data guide you.
(Image from Waves Audio)

I always imagine there’s a meter in your head, and this is positive and this is negative. And you’re just very lightly going through it and what you’re doing is reading that prose and watching that needle. And you’re not attributing cause, you’re not defending, you’re just watching. If the needle stays up in the positive, you’re good. And when you train yourself in this approach, you’ll see once in a while it’ll just drop. At that point, don’t say “Oh, no! I’ve failed. I have to go back to law school.” You just say very gently to the story, “What’s going on? I noticed that your needle dropped there, what do you think?” And if you approach it this way, eventually the story will say, “I don’t know, I’m just boring right here.” Once you get your defensiveness down, the story will very frankly tell you what’s wrong with it. And the fix is often quite simple. So my process is to read along in the story, hopefully keeping the needle up high. When it drops, don’t panic. You just keep going through the thing again and again, and eventually (you might be deluding yourself) you get to a point where it feels like the needle is up in the positive for the whole story. And then you’re done. โ€” George Saunders

The story I started in August 2023 has a lot of good stuff in it. To paraphrase Saunders, quite a lot of it’s in the positive zone. But there are places where the story is clear in its negative self-assessment, by which I mean I’m bored when I re-read it. The problem is that I haven’t done the work to figure out exactly where that is, and exactly what’s boring about it (and what I mean by boring in the first place). To use Saunders’ analogy, I haven’t had a meter; I’ve just had an idiot light, a big red bulb that just says “This whole story sucks. Stop now!”

So for the past couple of days, I’ve much more patient and detailed diagnostic work. I’ve gone back into the manuscript and laid out each scene within each chapter, as preparation for putting the meter onto each one individually. Using the opening chapter as an example, it looks like this:

At this point, I’ve done this for the first seven chapters, about forty scenes total. Just through the work of naming the subsections, I’ve discovered (for instance) that Chapter 6 Scene 10 isn’t accomplishing anything worthwhile for the story as a whole, and I’ll probably dump the whole 1,188 words in favor of a sentence or two somewhere else.

All of this work does a few things. First, it forces me to slow down and take what I’ve done in small segments, thinking closely about each one. Second, it allows me to celebrate the ones that really are working; more than I thought, perhaps. Third, it makes me more careful in defining “works” and “doesn’t work.” What exactly do I mean by those judgments? Is the language fun? Is the dialogue real? Is the scene advancing the plot, or developing one or more themes? Is it introducing uncertainties that will have to come to fruition later on? I spent much of the day today on Chapter 3 Scene 6, helping it do three pieces of work simultaneously instead of just one.

If it’s done right, the reader won’t notice any of that; she’ll just be carried forward. But the writer is working from a sounder foundation.

It’s Been a Hell of a Year

This is what the inside of my head has been doing.
(Image by Topsphere Media, via Unsplash)

It’s time.

2024 has been a productive and busy year, but it’s also been a creative lost cause. What exactly have I been doing?

The Town. Being chair of the Selectboard means that everything comes my way. When the Health Officer resigned, the board chair got that job by default. Three days later, a homeless drug user burned down the abandoned house she was living in after she was released from jail, and then the next day got bitten by all three of her dogs. We’ve had wildly contentious meetings about muddy roads and preserving trees and the quality of gravel from the local pit. When our transfer station attendant got a new job last December, one of the other board members and I have split the duties of running the place ourselves until we finally hired someone early last month. This is the year of renewal for our Hazard Mitigation Plan, and we’ve received a major grant for the renovation of a discarded Catholic church to become our new library (though we’re having trouble buying the building, with a new bishop coming in and the Diocese declaring bankruptcy… we should finally close a week from today).

The Election. Not merely the national scene, about which I’m optimistically terrified. Our local candidate for Vermont House needed Nora and I to step up and take over lots of campaign tasks. (There’s a whole story thereโ€”as Jack Webb used to say, names have been changed to protect the innocent.) Plus I’m a poll worker and an elections officer. The VT Secretary of State has issued guidance on what to do in the face of an active threat, and I’m seeing ads for junior-spaceman scam devices that supposedly detect wireless signals from voting machines to some secret web server where the Chinese-Venezuelan Jews can steal the election… there’s just a lot of lunacy out there. I’d say I’m looking forward to next Wednesday when it’s over, but in the Orange Era, elections are never over; they just turn into baseless, endless lawsuits. Or armed gangs.

Coaching. I led a writers’ group from September to May, which came to a trickling close when the specified end date arrived. I never knew how to be helpful. Maybe I was.

Work. I’ve taken on an external-evaluation job for a Federal grantee, which includes everything from questionnaire development and data analysis to buying 200 coffee gift cards for individual participants, all at a distance of 2,550 miles.

Home Life. It seems like we’ve had people over for dinner or potlucks, or staying with us for a few days, on every square of the calendar. It’s been a super-social year. And that’s before we get to the big project, which was the construction of our studio. It’s a treat (one of our neighbors called it “a public good”), but it occupied most of a year, from September to September.

Project by Glenn Tarbell, Tarbell Carpentry, Middletown Springs VT

With all of that going on, I haven’t made any space to just write. I’ve sat at the keyboard plenty, to no avail. I keep knowing that something’s going to come up, looking over my shoulder at all of my real and imaginary tasks, and so I don’t have the confidence to just go away for hours at a time and live in another world.

Writing isn’t about typing. It’s not about proofreading, or editing. Those things are all true, but they aren’t what writing is. Writing is fully inhabiting another life, as emotionally filled as my own. And that takes not merely time, but also permission. Permission I haven’t granted myself for a year.

I started this blog back in 2019, when The Adjunct Underclass was coming out. Since then, I’ve written three novels I’m really proud of; the blog was part of the discipline that let them emerge. But since last fall, I’ve had two really good ideas for a novel. And as the writer and teacher Robert Owen Butler says, if you have a good idea for a novel, you’re going to write a bad book. Stories don’t come from good ideas. They come from the spirit world, from what he calls “the place where you dream.” So I’ve driven those two books sixty or eighty pages into the swamp, with no hope of retrieval. That becomes its own cycle, work that doesn’t work that convinces me that I can’t do the work. Easier and safer to just lose myself to internet head.

So it’s time to be back, to clear the culvert and let the flow come free. Glad to see you.